Photo prompt © Kelvin M. Knight
Hey fellow Friday Fictioneers. I’m sorry for not joining in fully these past couple of weeks – I have been commenting on as many people’s stories as possible that came through the WordPress App on my iPhone (basically those of you I follow).
Life has been so hectic of late. So so hectic. Thank you for those of you who have contacted me via email or through WordPress comments to check I am okay. I am really touched by your concern. I am okay – I’m in a good place – I have just had to put my energies elsewhere this last fortnight, and maybe for another couple of fortnights until loved ones are fully on the mend and family matters settled.
It’s not all dim light though – a magazine sent a celebrity photographer from London to do a photo shoot on me last week. Chris O’Donovan is such a lovely lovely guy and I know the pictures he took of me for the story I wrote for a magazine that has become a front page story will be exceptional. Gulp. My first professional photoshoot. I hope you don’t mind me sharing this exciting news with you?
I so want to spend more time on the photo prompt this week – especially as it is mine – but time is tight. As soon as this blog is done I have comments to incorporate on a thematically linked flash fiction story that has been brewing ever since I started this blog, for a competition I blogged about and I am really impressed with the professionalism of the judge. This competition also has an anthology of winners and shortlisted stories. Well worth a read.
So, if my humble offering for this week’s prompt, The Bread of Life, is not wholesome enough for you, is too crumbly, I hope you will understand.
Thank you.
THE BREAD OF LIFE
by
Kelvin M. Knight
Altering the DNA of wheat so the kernels formed a heart in each loaf of bread was miraculous. The impact this new bread had on society was amazing. One bite from these wheat heart loaves filled people with joy. It mattered not if the bread was a French brioche or baguette, whether it was unleavened, Gluten free, an all-American muffin, Irish soda bread – even the German’s heavy Pumpernickel bread induced rejoicing. So much love spread – love for oneself, love for one another – that society, which had been on a knife-edge of annihilation, was saved.
‘Amen,’ sang the scientists.
(100 words)
Thank you to everyone for taking part this week (15/09/17), and reading each other’s stories, and liking, and commenting. You don’t have to be a Friday Fictioneer to read our stories so please don’t be shy, there’s a mix of styles and storylines all inspired by the same photo. To read other aspiring writers’ stories, click the Blue Frog.
Thanks, as ever, to Rochelle for hosting Friday Fictioneers so congenially.
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Thanks Natasha for such a lovely and glowing and gorgeous comment, Thank you 😊
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How exciting! A celebrity photographer and a magazine. You must be a brilliant writer. Which I am seeing as I read some of your posts
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Well, it was exciting. Chris caused quite a stir in the Tea Rooms on the beach. Some lovely old ladies on the table next to us, when – mid conversation – he just got this huge camera out – said I was a celebrity, then one of the men they were with said it was probably for the Sunday Sport. To which Chris admitted humbly, I do photograph for them. Thanks for your comments, C E, I have never been called a brilliant writer before. 😎
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I like your story, I think is has a completeness in the telling of it. And, I think it works at more than one level – such as scientist could alter the DNA of wheat, also it works as a fable, and as expressing a wish many people have to replace aggression with love. Well done.
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Hey, thanks for your rounded comment Woman Walking Max. I am glad you enjoyed my self-raising story!
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That’s a fantastic piece of bread spreading joy and love and all the nice things… but only if it was true, we wouldn’t need any peace committee or fences. A very creative story.
Thanks for sharing the photo Kelvin. 🙂
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Hey, Norma, thanks for your lovely comment. I hope it will be true one day. Hope and pray.
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Dang. I was sure I had left my comment…
Thank you for the wonderful picture and love your story. Oh would that it were true!
As for participating… you know, one story is more than enough! You usually bring so much so you are definitely allowed to “slack” off 😉
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Thank you, Dale, Slacking rhymes with whacking, right?!
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Uh huh…😎
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Errr… 😬…. and hijacking. Is it me of is this hole deepening… 🙄😎
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Do, keep on going, would love to see how far you’ll dig!!🤣
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😂 Probably to the root of me and beyond! Oh dear, now that sounds like Buzz Lightyear. 😶
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Ha ha Ha!! 😜
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And I was going to use that kooky emoji. Ah well, always a next time 🤐
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Which one is that?
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Oops… I just reread, thought you said “the” instead of “that”! 😝
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Haha here my dear would you like to use my spade? 😳
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LOL, this bantering has been quite fun!
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It has indeed. A bantering kindred spirit 🤡
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Any time!! 😉
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Inspiring story!
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Thanks, Sandra.
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Daydreaming, Kelvin?
Can’t blame you!👌👌👌
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Daydreaming and listening, spicedmullings. Always. 😎
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👍👍👍
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I loved your flash. Fabulous store. If only… Thanks for this week’s photo prompt. It was very inspiring:)
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Hey, Lucia, thanks for the fabulous comment. Glad I could inspire you with my loaf of bread slice. It quite surprised me.
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I really like your blog and am happy to have stumbled across it.
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Thanks, Vinnieh. Sometimes when we stumble it’s not all bad, hey? 😀
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Definitely agree. Happy to have discovered your blog.
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If only, as they say. Well done!
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Thanks Miles. If only, if only, if only.
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Loved this story of redemption based on science. Take that all you nay sayers!
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Haha yes… 😎
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Oh, my, I love this take on the prompt!!!! So very well done.
Glad you’re safe, congrats on the photo shoot and published story. Proud of you! Keep us posted.
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Oh wow Lish thanks for such an outpouring of positivity. Thank you so much! I feel blessed.
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I’ve been wondering how you would interpret your picture. This is imaginative, for sure. Wish it could be so easy to bring about world peace 🙂
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I wish it to, Linda and pray for it.
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Such a great idea. Have you patented the wheat yet? Lovely story.
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It is on my TO DO list. Was at top. Now near the bottom. 🙄
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What a wonderfully wholesome respite amid the chaos. Really enjoyed this write, Kelvin. Congrats on the photo-shoot! 🙂
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Thanks, Jelli. I like wholesome. What a lovely round and sustaining word it is. 🙂
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Dear Kelvin,
I’m really glad to hear you’re in a good place, and that things are working out.
You’ve written an encouraging, whimsical story.
All the best
Penny
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Thanks Penny . A good place I was… am in but it’s been a bumpy six weeks. Hopefully the next six will be smoother.
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We could certainly do with some of that miracle bread right about now.
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Definitely, Ali. We should all bake some and share it!
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Loved this! Who knows, science might still save the world.
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Thanks jj! Science bounded and bounding in prayer, perhaps. 🤖
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Aloha Kelvin! Good to see you back. I’m sure the family and other things need your attention more than the blog at this point of time. And that you will return with all the tingling creative juices, ready to set your blog afire.
Congratulations for the myriad feathers on your cap.
Your story is so lovely and hopeful. Loved your photo prompt too. It seems to be generating some really fantastic stories.
Stay well, Kelvin. Happy tidings. 😊
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Thanks Natasha for such a lovely and glowing and gorgeous comment. Thank you 😊
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Wow! Congratulations on the photo shoot! Sounds amazing Kelvin! Life always has other plans for us even when we are busy making our own…good luck with everything! Nice picture prompt this week that got a mommy tale out of my own life this week. 🙂
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Thanks Esha – model material I am not – yet Chris thought I was photogenic. Hmm 🤔
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Liked it
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🙂
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Amen…an interesting concept! Good to see you back 🙂
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Thanks, Carly, good to be back!
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Dear Kelvin,
I, for one, am relieved to see your name and story on the board. Life is what happens when you’re busy making other plans. 😉 As you can see, your delightful photo has inspired a variety of stories.
Oh that your story could come true. ❤ Well imagined and nicely written.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle – my wife has been discharged from the consultant back to her GP – she’s now half way mended even if she likes to think she is fully recovered following her operation. 🙄
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Good to hear from you Kelvin, gives me a wholesome feeling to know you’re reasonably ok, and that your crusty old heart is still looking after your family. Your little story was a slice short, but enough to feed on, and keep those in need alive….
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Thanks, Ivor. I was crumbling for a while then I used my loaf!
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That’s awfully stale Kelvin
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What an uplifting piece! And congratulations on your story!
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I meant to add at your picture is a neat prompt as well. 🙂
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😂 As uplifting as self-raising flour, Kelly. Lovely to see you over this neck of the woods!
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Now that is whimsical. I love the idea of evolution acting on an organism after it’s dead (and baked)
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Haha thanks for the love, Neil 🙃
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